I've just posted the final chapters of A Fantasy of Love. It has gone now as far as I could get it - re-reading and re-writing it several times.
It leads a young man to meet and love a beautiful and affectionate young woman, makes him discover another woman who wants to join them, and finally opens the door for a woman seeking love and care, to give and to receive. He is successful in his career, but has a serious setback when a newly appointed president of the comany he works in, forces him to choose another path. This leads to a complete change into a new business and he becomes successful there also. His life is not always easy, but intelligence, persistence, a good portion of humor, and the support of his ladies gets him to the top.
It is a long story and partly dialogue-driven, but I hope that you'll enjoy it (and give me some feed-back).