Hi All
I posted "Surprise!" a couple of days ago. I was very tired and I think the tequila did some of the editing.
I have paid attention to some of the comments, and the corrections were spot on, so I have reposted the story! Let's see if this works better.
At this point I know I said it was a flash story, but I'm thinking there might be another chapter in me....somewhere....someplace....maybe.
Later
Mick