Having an editor work with me for the past few stories has been wonderful!
The experience of finishing Xalir's DreamWeaver and now having someone check my work on The Strawberry Patch Book 3 has inspired me to go back and check my earlier stories with fresh eyes and a more discerning style of writing.
I just reposted "Don't Get Mad" and it seems to flow better and is less clunky than the original. I feel like a modern man redoing the things a neanderthal had done.
I'll post notices here everytime I finish a redo of a story. If you have the time and inkling to read the stories over again, feel free to comment on the upgraded story.