I can't seem to help myself... I take a couple of lazy days off from writing and come back to what I've posted and look at the file and decide to do some tweaking. So A Wait Problem is updated today, I don't know that I got everything that I should have, and I don't know that what I did to it has improved it. Then again, I am not trusting my judgement with regard to my own writing. After all your writing is somewhat like your children, that is that you tend to be apt to overlook flaws in either one due to wishing to launch them both into the future...
Anyway, I know it hasn't been a favorite of anyone's but I thought some might wish to know that I had done some minor changes and posted them.