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Major rewrite of Wounded Warriors of the Sexual Revolution

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I've done a major edit of "Wounded Warriors of the Sexual Revolution", cleaning up some plot points -- the science is improved although there's some alternate medicine -- and some overall editorial improvements. There will be a few additional chapters, but some of the longer-term healing will be in a sequel.

Even the first time through, I thought this was a decent story, but it's gotten low scores. If you had done so, I'd ask that you reconsider after the changes.

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