So, I have been thinking a few things over and have decided to reupload most of my work to the site. Yes, I have been listening to your comments and critiques and am applying them to my stories.
So, these new updates will not only be upgraded in the manner of errors and readability(even the one about low mortality rate) but also minus the additional commentary that some people have found annoying.
Most of my work has been adjusted in this way and I will continue to update and replace the other chapters for each story as the days go on. I hope everyone appreciates these new changes! Cheers!