The original idea came to me after touring the summer "cottages" on Jekyll Island, GA of the super rich of the 19th century. The tour guide opened a secret panel in one of the bedrooms to reveal a small elevator. She said the man of the house would bring his mistresses to his room this way.
I had that movie still picture of a topless, teen-aged Sophia Loren portraying a Roman slave girl in mind as I attempted to describe Leah.
For the story does anyone have an idea of what in 1950s dollars might be a irresistible temptation for a suburban housewife to come to the city and work at the men's club for a few hours? I have in mind a January Jones type from the Mad Men series.
I am aware of the many grammar errors. Why is it, I self proof a work several times before posting and then look at it on the site and immediately see problems.
I need an old school, non PC, proof person. Please copy and paste the text off the site, make corrections and send to thomhobsATgmail.com. Grammar and punctuation errors seen and marked appreciated. I also enjoy a good debate on character motivation.