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The Fuhrer's Seed

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One of the complexities of this story is the structure. I believe I made a mistake in submitting the first part of the story as chapter one. It should have probably been a Prologue. One reader advised me that I should have made it with "Hook" in the first chapter to get readers interested in the story. That reader was so right. I am not going to submit my chapter two because it just continues that same path down a boring descriptive background. I made a similar mistake in "The Taxi Driver Task Force" with putting in boring criminal reports up front and losing readers before the story had actually started. Both are good lessons and I will correct them before continuing along that same path. I think the Fuhrer's Seed is a good story line and the words will flow easily. The problem is to organize it in such a way that it will draw readers to it rather than turn them off with uninteresting background. I will resubmit this chapter one as a prologue after further editing and at the same time submit the chapter one that has a "hook" to gain reader interest. My thanks to the reader that sent me that valuable piece of advice.

 

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