As I struggle to recover all my lost data from a recent computer crash I came across the file with this story in it. Reading it I knew I could do better.
But I don't have the time to rewrite the whole things. So, I did a mild re-edit of this story. It was a self-edit; therefore, it may not be the most improved story out there. Anyway, for those that follow my work you might want to check it and reread it. You might not want to reread, it that is entirely at your discretion.
The story opens when Kristen, the trophy wife of a city council man, has car trouble in wrong part of the city. She walks into a bar seeking help only to find herself the object of hateful desire by the denizens of a ghetto dive.
Oh, my, I think maybe Kristen has made a mistake Kristen's Big Mistake