Hi All
This is the first time I have done a contest and I failed amazingly!
The concept was good, but the execution was not. I wrote it too fast, didn't edit it properly and got what deserved.
The folks who finished in the top 3 were wonderful. Well written and wonderful concepts. I didn't get last so tank you to the two people who voted for me, delusional though you may be.
I am going to do a rewrite down the road and fill out the story the way it should have been done. I hope Laz allows me to post that one in place of this one at some point in the future.
Mick