Some readers may have realized that I have posted this story before. It is a long one and received favorable comments as very good. English is not my mother tongue, and I always thought that is was a bit stilted showing my German origin.
I asked for help and a fellow writer was kind enough to give me some advice. I re-read everything, revised the text, added some action, and principally, made it more readable.
It is a story of four people meeting, falling deeply in love, having problems and resolving them, building a business, getting friends, and having a lot of fun. It is a fantasy: women are beautiful but not easy, sex is abundant, lots of money helps, and at the end, they live happily ever after …..
As every writer, I'm eager to get a comment. If it's bad, I think about it and will try to improve; if it's good, I enjoy it and take it as an incentive to continue.
I hope that you like it and if you are ever in need of help, contact Crumbly Writer; I am grateful for his recommendations.