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Dr. Retcon Strikes!

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As I work on my continuity guide, I've put up numerous tweaks and fixes to Too Much Love where continuity strayed a bit too far. Most of them are minor - characters given two different names (or in the case of Threnody's father, three different names) have gotten their name consolidated down to just one. Some dates have been changed. Some spelling has been fixed. So far, there's only been one really big fix worth mentioning.

In Chapter 43, Nick and Arwen are talking about their past and I managed to confuse myself about the year that Shelby moved to Brownfield Mills. It's established early on that she moved there in the summer after freshman year but over time, it became the summer after sophomore year. Once I realized my mistake, a lot of their discussion had to be rewritten. So if you read chapter 43 more than once and their discussion seems to have changed, it has.

There are still a number of continuity errors I've elected not to correct yet because they have low impact, but high effort to fix. Specifically, Connie Carlyle's name is spelled three different ways (Carlyle, Carlisle and Carlysle) and SSCS alternates between being Stryker-Stone Concierge Service and Stone Stryker Concierge Service.

Assuming there's another draft of Too Much Love (and there would need to be before I released it as an eBook,) I will go back and do my best to fix those, but for now, I've decided to focus on finishing the continuity guide and getting back to telling the story.

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