Hi All
The response to this story has been wonderful! Thank you to all who have made suggestions and pointed out corrections.
I have gone through and made all the corrections and done a bit of re-writing to make the story a bit more clear.
So many have made positive comments that I could not let the story end. I have begun working on the second book. It will be called "I Was Sitting At My Wedding On A Saturday Night" and I will work very hard to make it as good as many of you have said the first book was.
Mick