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I Won?

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Thanks for the all the kind words for 'I Won?'. Most of you liked the story. Even the critical emails were constructive and I thank you for those also. Yes, Jack could have been a lot more assertive and smarter. But then I've read too many stories where the teenage hero acts like a Fortune 500 chief executive. Carol was my readers' favorite character and she was my favorite too.

There will not be a sequel, but I am considering an edit and expansion to resolve and clarify some plot points based on reader feedback. There was mention of typos and misplaced words. If you happen to spot them please let me know and I'll correct the text.

 

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