I have officially submitted chapter 4.
For a few spoilers, this is a Rachel/Josh heavy chapter with some incite towards the end regarding Joshua's Linage and who Dr. Nitty is.
What I'm planning for chapter 5? Well it's gonna be shorter, that's for sure. 4 was 14 pages because I just had to get in that scene with... well you'll see. Anywho, it'll revolve around Joshua and Heather, that much i'm planning but as rewrites go, I don't know if i'll stick with it.
Signing off for now, cause tired...
R&R all.