Had one comment, I won't out the person, but they stated.
"Usually like this type story, but you lost me when
you started bible thumpin. Good luck"
So one character being true to them self ruins the whole story? What should I do, make them all atheists?
Sorry if the depiction of characters who are themselves turn you off. I'm not writing this to tow PC blandness and make cookie-cutter people.