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I have just Posted Updates:
To Literotica.com Chapter 16 part 2
To : SOL.com Chapter 14 part 2
To : Deviantart.com Chapter 12 part 2
To : Patreon.com The Abduction --- A Character background story.
This story falls between Chapter 23 part 1 and Chapter 23 part 2.
Thank you
Terry
This is a selection of part of the last chapter I am working on. The Adventures of Tim Bodge.
He turned towards the lift, and the clone blocked the way. He hit the clone, and at the same time, Tim gave him a kidney punch. Crook turned and swung at Tim; Tim stepped back and punched him with his left hand in the V underneath his ribs where the sternum ends. It paralyzed his diaphragm, and he gasped and doubled over. Tim reached for a handful of his hair and raised his head. Then he pushed his own head forward hard and smacked Crook's head, breaking his nose. Still holding his hair in one hand, He got his other hand into Crook's crotch and lifted him off the deck and slammed him back onto it. Crook grunted and went limp.
Hope you enjoyed this sample.
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A comment from a reader: Dealing with my story 'The Adventures of Tim Bodge.'
Chapter 9
My 2 cents
I have been enjoying this story. I have noticed minor errors in previous chapters, but they did not take away from the story. I like the story plot and the characters. I liked the difference in the characters and how they interact. I look forward to reading more and thanks for your time and your imagination.
If you have questions about the story or any comments, please feel free to contact me at thodge1945@yahoo.com
Thank you for reading my story
Terry
I will be posting Chapter 11 at Deviantart.com
Posting Chapter 14 at Storyofline.com
Posting Chapter 16 Part 1 at Literotica.com
Posting Chapter 22 Part 1 at Patreon.com
If you are interested, see one of these websites.
More comments from readers:
Chapter 5
Yes more please.
I am enjoying your story very much, I was looking forward to chapter 5 but as the other states it was just a long recap. I'll admit I didn't re-read too just scrolled read a little then scrolled just to find new content. I hope you will continue.
Yes I will continue at this time I am up to Chapter 23
Questions about the story just ask.
thodge1945@yahoo.com
A comment from a reader.
Chapter 4
Please continue this story it is just getting started and is good thank you
I hope everyone like this reader, enjoy the story. There will be more to come.
Thank you
Terry
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