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From: cwsawyer
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Subject: Re: The Adventures of Tim Bodge - Chapter 61

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Chapter 59

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Chapter 60

From Tim’s desk, Shanae stood and walked toward the bridge. Taking one last glance at the work she had been doing, Shanae headed for the bridge.

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From Tim’s desk, after taking one last glance at the work she had been doing, Shanae headed for the bridge.

Chpter 61

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Regards, Zululook The steaks have been changed to read stakes. SOL reposted the chapter.

“The story of Ella
Author’s notes: The language of the goblins is squeaks. Ella’s is broken English, and I have translated it for easier reading.

Posted chapter 60
lead in: Tim was lying there, "the thought of what could be happening on the ship filled his mind.' "Sarha, what is the status of your sisters' ships?"
"It seems like we're getting closer, and the gap is getting smaller every day."
"Is it making an effort to allow us to get closer?"
Sarha responded, "Yes, it appears so, but I don’t understand why."
"What would be the schedule for our meeting with them?"
"I believe that if we continue to take action and follow our plan, it is possible for us to meet up with them in less than a month."
"That's great. Is there anything else right now?"