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Yes I'll correct some 7,879 errors in Ch 1-17 and add Ch 18 before 1 Feb 2021.
From comments in the Twelfth Man story I get that there are readers that have never experienced money hungry people. Folks, money changes people, a lot of money does more. Nick came from money and many women wanted it and not him. You see what can happen by the way Jamie, Jenna and even Tara no longer wanted him as soon as they thought $10 Million each was a lot of money; which it is not.
Jess and Heather came from money and it shows. Jess never changed, Tony and Vince, Arthur too had it first though.
Side note. When Jamie thought Nick only had the $1 Million she dumped him for a new player who may have promise. Not all girls are like that but Money usually marries Money. A $ Million is a far cry from $ Billions.
Nick and Jess are better suited for each other. You all have heard the term 'Gold Digger', right?
As I posted in the story end notes or comments Ch1-11 are being corrected for typos.
Ch 18 will be delayed 2-3 weeks to complete the repost as one file.
Ch 18 is the wedding in Vegas. Jess and Nick DO get married.
Parts played by Tony and Vince in their discussion deal with the 'Business', Heather and Tara are uncertain about Nick's actual feelings or those of Jessica.
A war breaking out places Nick and Jessica under more pressure regarding to whom and what they sell as armaments A NGO (UN Non-government organization) plays a 'trump' card, they hope will result in a favourable/favorable decision.
Ch 19 covers much about that business aspect.
Thanks for the downloads, think we have 47,000 or so already. Remember this is a long story.
Just opened 'The Walk-On' to Public Viewing. Good comments on Ch 1-11 but Ch 12 on should get better and have more frequent updates.
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