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Want to thank Ross.at.Play for helping

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Ross.at.Play has graciously offered to help me in editing this story as well as helping me in other aspects.

I also can't forget to mention Crumbly writer who has been asked for his opinion and assistance as well.

If all goes well I will begin posting new chapters twice a week. Send me some input on which days you'd like to see them posted and we'll see what days get the most votes.

There may be a weeks delay before I post anything new, but when I do I hope to repost the final versions of all the current chapters as well. I originally posted the first few chapters to see if there was any interest in my story, and you guys and gals have blown me away with the responses.

You've all been very polite and haven't been derogatory at all. As a new author I really appreciate this.

Bear with me and I hope you like the way this story goes. Either way, let me know..

As always, thank you for taking the time to read my unworthy scribbling!

Tangoran

Thanks to bobh for catching a couple errors

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Bobh mentioned a couple errors and incongruities. They have been fixed and the corrected chapter should appear soon.

Chapters 1-3 edited and reposted.

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Thanks for tall the comments and suggestions! I have made changes and decided to repost the first three chapters. For future chapters I hope to have an editor on hand to catch errors as well as make suggestions for changes. I will also begin posting new chapters twice a week. Not sure which days yet but once chosen they will be consistent.

Thanks to everyone who has taken the time to read my work, and to those that have taken the time to comment. I hope you continue to follow the story and I look forward to reading your comments.

Chapter 3 uploaded

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Chapter 3 should show up sometime soon. Hope you guys keep giving me input...

Take it easy on me, please

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Hey all, so I've had this story in my head for a while and decided I'd give it a shot. Take a look and tell me what you think. I'll take any constructive criticism I can get...

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