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Hey folks. I’ve rewritten the first chapter of Ethan’s Nieces and cleaned up some of the story errors people have been nice enough to point out.
Once again, feedback is super helpful, I’m hoping to improve my ability as a writer and this story in particular is something of a playground premise for me to bounce ideas around with.
For now I’ve been trying to post a chapter a day, and the current rough draft has 13 chapters total. My hope is to have the completed story up by the second week of December.
Hey folks - I'm a long-time SOL reader and subscriber finally taking the plunge to publish my first story in the "Discovery" genre of family group incest. There's no easy way to plausibly present a family suddenly starting to fuck each other - or some dumbshit young man somehow not noticing it happen until he's welcomed with open arms - but I've always been a sucker for this ridiculous but fun premise and so I'm going to give it a shot.
I'd love any feedback you want to offer about my story in particular or how to write a good family swingers story. Let's poke at this stuff together, fellow perverts. Therefore, I present to you: Ethan's Nieces (originally titled "Family Cumraderie", per the link).
Thank you to all of you who rate stories and give feedback, but even if you don't, thank you for your attention! I hope you enjoy it, I really do.
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