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themes and chapter 1

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Chapter 1 should be going up soon, I'm almost done with it. I'm going to post it still without the help of an editor but it should have way less errors than the prologue did.

A major theme of story is how to focus down on a problem and examine it and all its posible solutions. That being said, Alexander likes to examine everything and come up with he best posible solution. He constantly shifts his veiw either out or in to accomodate this.

Hope you enjoy chapter 1.

prologue edit done

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Just submitted the fixed prologue, hopefully this clears up the errors

First post and feedback

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As you can see I'm a new author with my first post. I'm currently looking for an editor to edit my story. Thanks to Cat5 for his constructive help. I'm going to rewrite the prolouge and repost it soon. As always please feel free to email me with feedback or if you would like to edit my story let me know.

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