I know its been a long time since I posted chapter 4. What can I say real life got in the way. Some of you asked if it will be a incomplete story.let me reasuure you. It will not be a incomplete story. I will complete it however long it may take. I will try to post a chapter every week. But no guarantees.
I just finished chapter 4. I going to sleep now but before that I just want to post this. Thanks to aerosick my editor. He is helping me a lot in editing my story. Last time with all the errors the story has only got 6.0 ratting but now it increased to 6.75. All thanks to Mr aerosicks Help. And thanks to all the comments about my spelling mistakes and grammer mistakes I have been able to ask for help when I needed. As always comments are the only thing that will keep me going. So please if you have anything to say you are always welcome to comment. Thank you and good night.
Finally the edited version of the first three chapters is update.I fell so much better now. Now I am never going with out an editor.
Hey guys. I have finally beaten my pride into submission. I have ase aerosick for help. And he agreed to help me. I have sent the story to him for editing. I am reposting the first three chapter as soon as they are edited and sent back to me. I am still working on fourth chapter. Have a nice day everyone.