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A new chapter in my series, with two more parts to go. There isn't much sex in this chapter, and it's a bit boring because the witness protection program ended, the police wiped out the mafia, and we were able to go home. This time we slept at the girl's parents' house, where there were two new things.
1; There was her huge collection of lingerie in her room,
2; and since her parents slept on the same floor as us, we had to make love in complete silence.
Thanks for private messages and votes. The serie link in this blogpost.
I uploaded part 13 of my serie. I'm nearing the end, with only 2-3 parts left. In this part, there's another threesome, but while last time no one came, this time everyone did, someone more than once :)
The next part of my serie "Bad Idea: We Sent Sexy Pictures of My New Girlfriend to My Buddy" is under development. Which means I'm translating it. I'm using DeepL because AI rewrites it, and I don't want that. But the original style may not be very good in English. Although it might be better if it rewrote it, I don't know. The English isn't very good with Deppl, but if I leave it to AI, it will rewrite it and I lose a slightly dry, descriptive style, which I don't want. I like this story written in a dry style. I hope it will be finished today. The new part is relaxed. There's no crime, but the cheating will turn into a threesome. Then, the program is slowly coming to an end, and my two characters can go home because the long-awaited action is happening in their city. Not too many chapters left, so will be finished soon.
There is no crime story in this part, sex has returned. The main female character wants to get her old life back after being raped, but this is not easy, neither for her nor for her boyfriend.
Although I often upload a corrected version afterwards, I feel that this is pointless. The stories are viewed by those who are interested in only on the day they are uploaded, but after that there is no ongoing interest and the whole thing sinks into oblivion (disinterest). So if the corrected version is delayed by a few hours or even a whole day, no one will read it.
Regardless, I made some minor corrections to one of my chapters. In case anyone is interested. I use Deepl for translation, but it's not always accurate. Maybe I should feed the original text into an AI instead of a translator?
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