Thanks for everyone that has stuck with me. Hopefully I can get on a regular schedule.
I made minor changes to chapter 19, frankly not worth rereading just clearing for future readers. Now I have a question. Do I go back and repair continuity errors or continue from chapter 19 and repair after the problems are mainly with Cathy not being a Jr. Lifeguard or Toms age when she should have been a rising junior and 17. Just know that where characters are where they belong and I will try to be more diligent
Thanks for reading and your constructive feedback
RedRambler
I want to apologize for the long delay on new chapters. Frankly I think I've written myself into a corner. I need to re-think my whole premise so please hang in there with me. I will continue to get Tom through 9th grade and beyond
Thanks to all of you that gave me solid comments
RedRambler
I have started an origin story for Tom Hardy that will catch up and run parallel to my original story (Most likely in book 2)
Again, I welcome constructive comments and don't forget to vote for all the stories you read on SoL It is our metric we use to see how well we are doing
Thanks for reading
RedRambler