Pars001: Blog

S.H.E.I.L.A., which was first published in 2017, has now been completely grammar-checked and finely tuned.

It's the story of Roger Grace, a brilliant cybernetic/android programmer, who has spent the past 15 years developing S.H.E.I.L.A., a synthetic, humanoid, enlightened, inquisitive, living android that had far superior capabilities than normal humans. Imagine his surprise (none) when the military tried to grab his creation and then hunted him!

It's about 82,000 words overall, and I've posted it over at Bookapy if you'd like to grab a copy now, or you can read it here as we get to reposting it.

Next we'll be reposting Sovereignty, which has also undergone extensive revisions for grammar, spelling, and the like.

Have a great Thursday!

Pars

Hello! My name is ahorsewithnoname, and my friend Pars001 has hired me to edit his work. He's noticed your comments on how he's a great storyteller, but needs assistance with grammar/spelling/structure. That's where I come in. :)

We have started with Toman of the Cherokee, having removed all the chapters here except for the first. We've reposted the 1st and the 2nd chapters, for your reading pleasure, and hope to continue to do so weekly. Depending upon acceptance and comments, we'll also begin this for other works here.

The complete version of Toman of the Cherokee is available, revised throughout, all 88,000+ words, at Bookapy. At under five dollars, it's a good deal, and for those of you who partake and support Pars001, I can tell you that he is grateful for your support and patronage.

I wrote A mind's eye in one day I haven't been that inspired in a while hope all enjoy.
Pars001

Hey all working on the latest chapter of Lost Empire. Recently avoided tragedy my mom almost died so haven't been able to write

I am currently working on my Christmas story for this year along with the next chap. of Lost Empire.