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Merry Christmas to all! While I am continuing to edit my primary story (Aztlan Portal), and am trying to get editorial assistance, I keep writing. Currently I am pet and house sitting.
While I am away from home I have written a short 'Christmas Story' set during the fierce combat of the Battle of the Bulge. Winter of 1944-45 was one of the coldest winters, in Europe, in a hundred years. Such difficult conditions may inspire a deeper appreciation of the little things in life, and life itself.
My current internet is not great. Although the story is complete, I am posting just one chapter a day. I had hoped to start posting sooner, so the story would finish on Christmas Day.
I have had to rush the self-editing, so I am sure I have missed more than a few errors. I welcome any constructive criticism. In particular any spelling errors. I intend to repost the chapters, after making corrections. I think the story is good, but I want to correct any errors. Please PM me, or post in the Forums.
Wishing all of you and your Loved Ones a very Mery Christmas! Most veterans, who have spent holidays, or even years away from their homes and loved ones, while in the service of their nation, tend to have a deeper appreciation of Christmas, and the little pleasures of life.
God Bless and protect the members of the Washington Army National Guard who have been mobilized to assist communities threatened by flooding, and others in the USA, and across the globe, who will be away from Home, Harth, and Loved Ones, this Christmas.
I appreciate Great CONSTRUCTIVE Criticism, in particular spelling errors. akarge sent me numerous corrections, the most serious was that I wrote the first two lines of Chapter two in Third Person, and then reverted to First Person. WOW! I hadn't noticed that in several passes of self-editing!
I was going to wait until at least Monday, or perhaps January 2nd to upload various chapters with corrections. However, this is such a serious error, I am going to fix it in the next couple of hours!
Thanks also to soil4now, ystokes, fisherhunter567, and others for their Constructive criticisms too.
I am pet sitting, and had no internet connection on Christmas Eve, and Christmas. I hope it is back on, however, I drove in and used the office internet. I posted Chapter 2 of A Thoughtful Christmas Gift this morning, and will post chapter 3 this evening. Hopefully, I will be able to post from where I am staying. Otherwise, I will drive in and post chapters from another location.
Merry Christmas to all! While I am continuing to edit my primary story (Aztlan Portal), and am trying to get editorial assistance, I keep writing. Currently I am pet and house sitting.
While I am away from home I have written a short 'Christmas Story' set during the fierce combat of the Battle of the Bulge. Winter of 1944-45 was one of the coldest winters, in Europe, in a hundred years. Such difficult conditions may inspire a deeper appreciation of the little things in life, and life itself.
My current internet is not great. Although the story is complete, I am posting just one chapter a day. I had hoped to start posting sooner, so the story would finish on Christmas Day.
I have had to rush the self-editing, so I am sure I have missed more than a few errors. I welcome any constructive criticism. In particular any spelling errors. I intend to repost the chapters, after making corrections. I think the story is good, but I want to correct any errors. Please PM me, or post in the Forums.
Wishing all of you and your Loved Ones a very Mery Christmas! Most veterans, who have spent holidays, or even years away from their homes and loved ones, while in the service of their nation, tend to have a deeper appreciation of Christmas, and the little pleasures of life.
God Bless and protect the members of the Washington Army National Guard who have been mobilized to assist communities threatened by flooding, and others in the USA, and across the globe, who will be away from Home, Harth, and Loved Ones, this Christmas.
I wish all of you a very Merry Christmas, and joy in other celebrations you may partake in.
Happy New Year to you and your Loved Ones!
May we all have sufficient time to read, to write, and improve over the next year.
In the hope that we often feel in the coming of the New Year, I have also wished for Peace on Earth, good will to, all a cure for cancer, and practical cold fusion.
A fellow writer here responded, "There may be a credible breakthrough for Fusion power to generate electricity."
So, we may even be able to achieve our Writing, Editing, and Reading goals in 2023!
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