other than one grammar mistake...it reads pretty well. But...I Laughed out loud when I read it.
Fixed.
Tyche
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Figgy bit...I wrote.
I hope
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I hope this chapter...26...makes sense.
seven days
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7 days with NO SOL.
7 days out of contact with fantasy.
7 days worth of ideas flushed down the toilet.
7 days stuck...and bleeding.
7 days...and nights...with the hottest and youngest nurses...
AAARRRGGGHHH!!!
blood
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two more teeth out...was not fun...but there was so much blood after, I had to go back and have stitches.