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Secrets of Liberty Mountain - Chapter 10

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UPDATE
Chapter 10 of 45 has been Submitted and is in the posting queue. It should be up shortly. Thus far 21,070 words of 103,600 are online. 20.3%



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Coffee is the nectar of the gods and Colombia's only legal drug export. It is also a natural lubricant, allowing us to slide from slumber to wakefulness with a minimum amount of friction. I take mine black with cream and more sugar than seems reasonable.



BETA READERS WANTED: I owe a debt of gratitude to the SoL community for the many words of encouragement, critical observations, and positive votes sent my way. Thank you. I doubt I could have finished without your help.

Today, I'm asking for your feedback and thoughts on plot, character, writing style, reader enjoyment, etc. Does the story hold your interest? Are the characters "real"? Please, when you leave a comment or post, please do so if you were a BETA reader.

BETA READERS are usually an unpaid test readers of an unreleased work of literature or other writing, who give feedback from the point of view of an average reader to the author. A beta reader is not a professional and can, therefore, provide advice and comments in the opinions of an average reader. This feedback is used by the writer to fix remaining issues with plot, pacing, and consistency. The beta reader also serves as a sounding board to see if the book has had the intended emotional impact. Source: Wikipedia

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