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Due to my goof the trailing chapters in Z… are now a new story.
Z's biography continues as Z and Fran make more than $30k, most of it while serving as housekeepers. They also host a girls-only party. In the last 4 chapters boyfriend Rick visits for Christmas but life gets in he way - they adapt and Z makes over $3,000 while keeping everybody happy.
These 17 chapters are organized into 5 main sections:
Lead into and the first Copulating Couple's Cruise
Clothing Optional Beach tour for cruise ship passenger
An 8-girl party (Spoiler: the pizza delivery guy does not get invited in)
Serving as housekeepers
Rick visits on Christmas break
My new story, Dead Girl's Vengeance, is now posted. It seems that when a young girl is murdered, trained dead girls can respond with deadly vengeance. Whenever possible non murdering child abusers associated with the murderer are allowed to live with an indelible reminder of their misdeeds. I had to check 'violence' for the murder and mutilation visited upon child abusers.
About 'Z': I have more chapters written but not well organized. About Generous Offers: Still working on several areas. But Mike and his ladies go on that cruise. Their blatant sexuality as the ship starts moving gets a crowd for next morning exercise.
Just posted chapters 23..34 in Z : Facing the World (and Getting Paid) -- http://storiesonline.net/s/17016/z-facing-the-world-and
Z is offered a job helping a caterer. His customers are in very open relationships. Z becomes a paid participant in the fun that follows dinner. When sister, Fran, is almost 18, Z fulfills a client's fantasy taking her to the guy's home. Z did not expect what she saw upon entering his home. Later, Z and Fran get unwelcome news from their shared boyfriend, Rick.
More chapters are being finalized including:
* Leading a cruise ship excursion to a clothing optional beach
* Being a hostess on a late night 'copulating couples cruise'
I updated a few words in 6 chapters. Most notably, Z's finance guy's explanation of fees. Someplace between non-paragraph line breaks in Word, my HTML maker script, and whatever SOL does, led to that list being badly formatted.
When Mitch was buying jacket and boots for Z, I made a silly homonym error. Unrelated to that error I had tried to use strikeout type (not allowed in SOL) near that error. While trying to demonstrate an SOL bug (there was no bug) I posted in the author's hangout my replacement text. I was teased about using the wrong word without anyone ever coming right out and saying which word was wrong.
More chapters are in the works. At 16 Fran joins Z in a job interview. With Fran almost 18, Z takes her to a client's home. Fran mostly behaves.
I am a retired software guy. I'm finding out that writing stories is quite different from writing s/w documentation. I am a firm believer in consent in matters of bodily autonomy especially when it comes to sexuality. I will not be writing about rape. Prostitution among adults should be unregulated except for rules related to consent.
My first contribution to SOL is Z : Facing the World (and Getting Paid)
Already posted is an introduction and chapters 1..11. Z is my main character. We first see her at 13 where she soon faces a challenge that no 13yo should have to face. Her two jobs are school and being the best mother she can be to her 11yo sister. (Child Protective Services visits daily.) At 16 Z gets a boyfriend and the sisters have no problem having their way with him.
In a few days chapters 12..21 should be posted. Z turns 18 and needs a job. Her actions near the end of chapter 1 lead to a one-time gig which goes well.
She writes a simple ad. It's short on detail for good reasons - she is looking for clients that will please her. We know from how Z and her sister, Fran, treated their shared boyfriend that both enjoy physical sex. Z is very lucky. Her first client from her ad is well off. He treats her well. Her last client in this group of stories is perhaps the richest man on the island. (Z asked me to bury a clue about Mel in a previous chapter. My only hint is that a text search will not help.)
Following chapter 21, Z takes 16yo Fran with her for a dinner meeting with a caterer. Fran pushes boundaries. Those chapters are written but need polish.
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