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I have posted 4 short stories under the humiliation tab today.
I’m working on a lesbian Christmas story, should be finished this weekend.
I’m working on a whole host of story lines but having a problems concentrating on any one story.
St Dominic Chapter 4 (process of being edited by E)
Dr. Healey Chapter 2 (mostly written)
Mavis Chapter 2
Mouth for Sale (working title)
Office News under the Delores Throckmorten story line (might put it under the humiliation tab)
Tiffany, a mother son cuckold story (the story line has kind of gone off the rails at this point I have to rethink the story line)
Zealot Island, a mother son vacation island (opening chapter is written)
Homesteading (need to clean it up and then edit it… I keep saying that)
Mother’s guide to handjobs
The One Percent
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I’m working full time, trying to write and living at home. It’s just going to be slow going finishing stories.
Merry Christmas all
Love Mary
Thanks for the review of the Dr. Healey story line. I had agonized over adding 2-3 more chapters as the story line could go in so many wonderful directions. I guess I could write a second chapter just to see where it goes and then end it. The thing is additional chapters wouldn't be completed until well into next year and there are other story lines I want to explore.
Homestead is finished, I just need to purdy it up. When I finished the story I realized I forgot to mention or add anything about the natives living in the area of the homestead. I guess I could have a western type story line set in Nebraska in the 1830s without natives being involved in the story, but it seemed to leave something important out.
Making Water is almost finished. A story where females from birth to old age drink urine to create fresh water when they urinate for males to use. Not sure if I'm going to add chapters to this story line.
Mavis part 2 is almost finished. This will be the final chapter.
I also have a new editor named "E". Thanks E for picking up on the spelling errors, suggesting additional scenes, and dialogue.
We're coming into the holiday season so writing might slow down a bit.
Love Mary
Hello readers,
Well I'm back summer vacation. At work, catching up on stuff and fighting my way through depression. It will be a while before I start back writing. I was depressed driving through across the south with my parents, more depressed visiting their old church.
It will be a several weeks before I can pull myself together. I feel so overwhelmed with life right now.
I do have stories lined to be finished but it will just be some time before I complete them.
Thanks for your understanding.
Mary
Thank you readers for your response to The Homestead story line. I had 47 responses (I thought I would only get a handful at best). 44 responses want option 2 and of those, 33 wanted some variation of light punishment to go along with option 2. I agree.
I'm 8 pages into the story line. Not sure if there will be follow-on chapters. One question I was asked though, what about the local tribes in the area? The plains Indians weren't very welcoming of settlers traversing their lands. I'm going to introduce a local tribe of Ogallala Sioux into the mix. No fighting or anything. I see the family as needing protection because of their isolation out on the prairie. The problem will be handled with sex, but in a different way.
I should have the story line completed by the end of summer, maybe sooner.
I have five stories lined up for text to speech editing. That will take some time which will cut into the Homestead story writing. I'm still planning on dropping a story (or chapters on existing story lines) each week starting next month.
Be safe wherever you are, thank you for the responses.
Mary
Colin Bashear, 38
Carol Bashear, 32
Susan Bashear, 16
Emma Bashear, 15
Caleb Bashear, 14
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The year is 1838, pan-handle of Nebraska. Colin is hunting with Caleb. A bison severely injures Colin as Caleb watches and Colin soon dies. The family is on the prairie with nobody around for miles, the closest settlement is a trading post 10 miles away.
After the family buries him, Susan wonders what is to become of them. Emma asks if they are going to return to St Louis. Carol turns and looks at Caleb and says that he is the man of the family now. Whatever Caleb decides, she and the girls will go with it.
Option 1: Should Colin be an abusive husband and father? Boys learn a lot from their fathers. He watches as his father has his way with the mom and sisters. Living by themselves, he thinks this is the way females should be treated?
Option 2: Should Colin be a caring and thoughtful husband and father? Caleb still learns from him on how to run a household.
Question 1: Using one or the other above, how should Caleb make the jump to fucking his mother and sisters? Option 1 might be easier.
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