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Thanks to all who re-read chapter one of Dominic's Heroes. I just re-posted the other three chapters of the book. Hopefully all the mistakes are out of them and you like what I added.
Thanks for reading...
Just posted Dominic's Heroe's chapter 1 after rewriting it.
We added some more story about how they got the money. We also added some things to it that will make the later chapters make a bit more sense. And we tried our best to find all the little mistakes that you the readers told us about.
If you're interested, please read it again and let us know if it's better or worse than the original.
Thanks for sticking with us...
We were asked to take another look at Dominic's Heroes. Some people have asked if I would write in some more of the team taking the money. So Rick did just that. He's also correcting minor mistakes I've made in the other stories. He'll also be adding small parts into the other chapters as well.
I hope you'll take a read and let me know how we did with this and if it's better or worse.
Thanks for reading our stories...
Ok, after MUCH headache trying to make chapter 10 sounds at least some what realistic, we have finished it. There was some problems trying to get some of the accounting terminology correct. Originally, I was planning on putting some accounting stuff in it, but changed my mind when I actually read about how involved it is.
Rick is going to read over it tonight after hockey and tomorrow. It should be posted on Monday at the latest.
Thanks for sticking with us
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