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A literary coming-of-age novel about a teenage girl who initiates a relationship with her father at fourteen—told entirely from her perspective across four years. Not as trauma or cautionary tale, but as she experiences it: transactional at first, then intimate, then complicated by guilt, friendship, ambition, and the question of what she's willing to sacrifice for what she wants.
Victoria Harris is fourteen, wants to be a writer, and thinks she's figured out how the world works.
Transactions. The senior girls in the bathroom talking about their boyfriends: As long as I'm sweet about it, he'll give me whatever I want. Her father's eyes following her when she wears short shorts. The way proximity becomes possibility when her mother works night shifts at the hospital.
Vic is smart. Observational. She sees the pattern and decides to use it.
What starts as transactional—a hug for twenty dollars, sitting close during movies, escalating carefully to see if he'll follow—becomes something else entirely. By spring of freshman year, they're in a Vegas hotel room. By sophomore year, she's taking Plan B in parking lots. By junior year, she's the one lifting the condom boundary because she trusts him now.
But it's not simple.
Her best friend Madison is going through something similar with her uncle. Gets pregnant at fifteen. Needs an abortion and can't tell anyone. Vic's father drives them to the clinic—two hours away, pays cash, no conditions. Vic watches Madison afterward, broken in ways Vic doesn't feel broken, and starts questioning what the difference is between them.
Her father's breeding kink intensifies. Gonna fill you up. Gonna get you pregnant. Words that make them both lose control. Except when you're having unprotected sex on day twelve, they're not just words anymore.
Her mother is upstairs. Or at work. Or asleep. And Vic is sneaking to her father's office at midnight, tracking her cycle, living two completely separate lives. The guilt starts eating at her—not about what she's doing with her father, but about what she's doing to her mother.
This is a story about a girl who thought she understood transactions—and spent four years discovering that nothing about love, sex, family, or choice is that simple.
Father/daughter incest (biological), ages 14-18, explicit sexual content throughout, breeding/impregnation kink (becomes literal), unprotected sex, stealthing, pregnancy scares, Plan B usage. Parallel storyline: friend's relationship with uncle (pregnancy/abortion). No rape/non-con. No recovery narrative. No moral resolution from author.
For those looking for a happily ever after: this is as close as you'll get from me—but it's pretty close.
Hey everyone,
I just wanted to pop in and give a huge thank you to everyone who voted and shared their thoughts in the poll for my next project. The response was honestly overwhelming—in the best way possible!
It was a surprisingly close race, which just goes to show how much you all appreciate different shades of dark storytelling. In the end, though, Option B (the romantic father/daughter story) edged out as the winner.
I'm really excited to dive into this one. The emotional complexity and character-driven focus are elements I love writing, and it’s clear many of you are eager to explore that depth as well.
For those who were rooting for Option A (the "Ugly Bastard" corruption arc)—don't worry! That story is still very much on my list. I’m looking forward to tackling that visceral challenge soon.
Thanks again for your incredible engagement. Your feedback truly helps shape what I write next. Now… time to get to work! 😊
I'm at a decision point with my next project and want to hear from you.
I have two complete story outlines ready to go. Both are father/daughter. Both are dark. But they hit very different registers, and I can only focus on one at a time.
I'm not asking which one I should write — I'm going to write both eventually. I'm asking which one you want to see first.
Option A: Ugly Bastard / Aku-Oyaji Corruption Arc
The Setup:
• Repulsive older man (think: peak ugly bastard archetype)
• Teenage daughter + her best friend
• Systematic corruption through leverage, blackmail, and psychological manipulation
• Multiple POVs (the girls — you're inside their heads as it happens)
• Heavy focus on physical revulsion vs. involuntary response
• Explicit scenes rendered in detail
• Pregnancy as endpoint
Option B: Romantic Father/Daughter with Emotional Weight
The Setup:
• Father and daughter navigating complex emotional/romantic territory
• NOT vanilla romance — this includes heartache, mistakes, consequences, character growth
• Relationship develops over time (not instalove, not purely transactional)
• Heavier focus on interiority, psychology, the why behind choices
• Explicit scenes present but serving character development rather than being the primary driver
• Explores the genuine emotional complexity of a taboo relationship
So: Which One First?
These aren't substitutes for each other. They scratch different itches. One is about corruption and physicality. The other is about connection and emotional mess. Both are dark. Both are father/daughter. Both will push boundaries in their own ways.
Vote in the comments:
• Option A if you want the ugly bastard corruption story first
• Option B if you want the romantic f/d story first
Third Option?
If neither of these sound like what you're craving, feel free to mention what genre/dynamic you'd most want to see from me in a future project. I'm not taking story requests — this isn't a commission thread — but I am interested in understanding what resonates with my readers.
(Examples: sibling incest, age gap non-incest, supernatural/fantasy taboo, historical setting, different POV structure, etc.)
Your feedback genuinely helps me prioritize what to work on next.
Drop your vote below. And thank you for reading.
[Working title "Forbidden Server" has been revised]
The story is complete at ~66,000 words. Looking to release in a few days
Bred by Design
Part 1 of The Architect's Files
A dark romance about falling in love inside a cage you didn't know existed—and staying once you see the bars.
The Setup:
Paige Chen (15) is competing on THE COLLECTIVE—a Discord server where high school status is earned through explicit content. When her rival posts a sex tape, Paige panics. She needs boyfriend content to compete, but boys her age can't be trusted.
Her best friend Sara offers a solution: use Paige's father as her anonymous "boyfriend Tyler." He's safe. He won't tell. Just for the videos.
Sara films the blowjob. Then when Marcus Williams—a senior who's already raped and impregnated two girls—starts targeting Paige, Sara guides them to the solution: let her father breed her instead.
One session. Peak fertility. No condom. Sara's cameras capturing everything.
Paige gets pregnant at fifteen with her father's baby.
By the time they realize how thoroughly Sara orchestrated everything—the competition pressure, the timing, even how long the Marcus threat continued—they're too deep to leave.
They confront Sara. Discover the manipulation. Choose to stay anyway.
Because the love became real, even if the circumstances were designed.
What This Is:
A father-daughter romance that Sara architects from the first suggestion. Real sexual escalation. Real breeding. Real pregnancy. They fall in love even though Sara built the cage. They choose each other repeatedly, knowing the cost, unable to stop.
Expect:
• Breeding content played straight—fertility tracking, ovulation obsession, pregnancy at 15, creampies described in detail
• Sara's clinical documentation as she films everything and guides them past every boundary
• The moment they realize they've been manipulated—and choose to stay anyway
• A relationship that feels inevitable even though every step was calculated
• Pregnancy that changes everything
• Love that's genuine despite manufactured origins
Told from Sara's perspective (third person limited) as she documents her experiment.
What This Isn't:
Non-consent between Paige and her father. They choose this. Every act. Every video. Every escalation. The manipulation comes from Sara creating the circumstances, not from physical force between them. When Paige later discovers the stealthing, she confronts both Sara and her father—and chooses to continue the relationship anyway.
⚠️ CRITICAL CONTENT WARNINGS:
This story contains multiple triggering elements. Please read carefully.
Main Relationship - Father/Daughter Incest:
• Underage protagonist (15 years old)
• Father/daughter incest (blood relation)
• Age gap (15/43)
• Progressive sexual escalation (blowjob → defloration → breeding)
• Breeding/pregnancy/impregnation kink (intentional, during fertile window)
• Teenage pregnancy (15, becomes pregnant, carries to term)
• Rough sex (deep penetration, cervical contact, size difference emphasized)
• Defloration (painful first time, blood, hymen tearing)
• Marathon sessions (physically overwhelming but consensual)
• Dominant/submissive dynamic
• Filmed sexual content (Sara's voyeurism throughout)
• Stealthing (condom removal mid-sex without Paige's knowledge; later discovered and confronted)
• Safe word withheld (Sara tells father but not Paige)
• Secret relationship (hidden from mother)
• Ongoing sexual relationship (multiple times daily by story's end)
• Homeschooling arrangement (father teaching pregnant daughter, 24/7 access)
Psychological Manipulation & Dubious Consent:
• Sara engineers the situation (creates circumstances, guides escalation)
• Manufactured social pressure (competition dynamics)
• Dubious consent (they choose, but circumstances were designed)
• Withheld information (safe word never given to Paige, evidence timing)
• Voyeurism (Sara films everything, maintains archives)
• Social engineering and calculated coercion
• Surveillance (Sara monitors their activity, documents everything)
• Discovery & confrontation (subjects realize manipulation, choose to stay)
Sexual Violence by Antagonists (Discussed/Referenced):
• Rape and gang rape (Marcus and crew, multiple victims)
• Alyssa Kim (14): raped, impregnated, ongoing exploitation
• Madison Cooper (16): gang-raped by multiple attackers including her 14-year-old brother
• Multiple victims (7+ girls impregnated and ghosted by Marcus)
• Incestuous rape (brother rapes sister as crew initiation)
• Video evidence (assault videos exist, used as blackmail)
• Racial fetishization (Marcus targets Asian girls, uses cultural shame as weapon)
• Active threats against Paige (Marcus planning assault, creates crisis)
• Predatory grooming and ongoing exploitation
These elements are discussed/shown through video evidence Sara finds, not depicted in real-time scenes.
Pregnancy & Medical Content:
• Teenage pregnancy (15 years old, intentional)
• Incest pregnancy (father/daughter, genetic risk discussed)
• Fertility tracking (ovulation timing, peak fertility targeting)
• Impregnation focus (breeding kink, creampie emphasis)
• Pregnancy journey (20 weeks by story's end, continuing)
• Medical anxiety (birth defect risks, ultrasounds, genetic concerns)
• Body changes (discussed, visible pregnancy progression)
Family Dynamics:
• Deception of mother (Mrs. Chen believes Tyler story)
• Secret family unit (father/daughter/baby)
• Homeschool arrangement (unlimited daily access)
• Normalcy performance (hiding relationship from mother)
Other Content:
• Server activity and social media dynamics
• Police investigation (antagonists arrested)
• Victim aftermath (Alyssa gives baby up, Madison keeps hers)
• Evidence discovery and delayed reporting
Themes:
• Manufactured vs. genuine consent
• Choosing the cage you were built to enter
• Love developed under manipulated circumstances
• The ethics of "acceptable outcomes"
• Surveillance and documentation
• Knowing you were designed and staying anyway
If you have triggers around:
• Incest (father/daughter, blood relation)
• Teenage pregnancy (intentional, 15 years old)
• Stealthing/reproductive coercion
• Withheld safe words
• Psychological manipulation by a "friend"
• Sexual assault (even off-screen/discussed)
• Racial fetishization
• Sibling incest (antagonist storyline)
• Detailed pregnancy/breeding content
• Gaslighting/social engineering
This story may not be safe for you.
What Evolved From the Original Pitch:
This became darker and more complex than I planned. Sara's manipulation is surgical—she doesn't just suggest, she orchestrates. The sexual content is real from the beginning—actual father-daughter contact that escalates with each video.
But the relationship between Paige and her father becomes emotionally genuine. Engineered circumstances, real feelings. They fall in love because Sara designed the conditions—but the love itself is theirs.
The ending resolves this tension. They know. They understand. They choose it anyway.
This is Part 1 of The Architect's Files. Sara has other experiments running. But Paige's story is complete and standalone.
POV & Structure:
POV: Third person limited (Sara's perspective throughout)
Length: ~66,000 words, 17 chapters
Status: Complete
Sara documents everything. The reader sees exactly what she sees, knows exactly what she knows. Her clinical observations. Her deliberate timing. Her moment-by-moment orchestration.
And then—the moment her subjects discover what she did. Confront her. Choose to stay anyway.
Forbidden Server is a father/daughter romance wrapped in social media competition, manipulation, and secrets that could destroy everything.
Unlike my previous works heavy on non-consent, this story centers on a genuinely developing relationship between Paige Chen (15, sophomore) and her father. They choose each other. Repeatedly. Knowing the cost. What starts as a desperate solution to Paige's problems becomes something neither of them expected—something real.
But this is still me writing, so it'll never be vanilla romance.
The Setup:
Paige is locked in a vicious competition with her longtime bully Jessica on "The Collective"—a private Discord server where high school students post increasingly explicit content for status. Paige refuses to lose.
Her best friend Sara offers a solution: use Paige's father as her anonymous "boyfriend Tyler" for video content. He's safe. He'll keep secrets. He won't brag or ghost her like the boys at school would.
What neither Paige nor her father expect is how quickly "just for the videos" becomes something more.
What makes this different:
This is about two people who shouldn't want each other but do. Who can't have a normal relationship but build something real in the spaces between Mrs. Chen's work shifts. Who make terrible choices for understandable reasons and have to live with the consequences.
He wrestles with guilt but can't stop wanting her. Paige feels the weight of what they're doing but can't regret him. And Sara? Sara's filming everything, pulling strings neither of them see, protecting Paige in ways that cross every line.
But this is still me:
Expect breeding content played straight—fertility tracking, pregnancy risk, creampies described in detail. Expect stealthing and manipulation. Expect Sara's voyeuristic control as she orchestrates scenes and guides them past boundaries they didn't know they'd cross.
Expect external threats that make their forbidden relationship seem like the safer choice. Expect secrets that will destroy them if revealed. Expect a pregnancy that changes everything.
What it is: Dark romance about choosing someone you shouldn't, enabled by a friend with her own agenda.
What it isn't: Non-consent between Paige and her father. They choose this. The violations come from elsewhere.
Content warnings: Underage (15-16), father/daughter incest, breeding/pregnancy content, manipulation, voyeurism, discussion of external threats
If you want father/daughter romance that actually feels romantic while still being deeply fucked up, this is it. The love is real. The damage is real. And Sara's watching it all through her camera lens, satisfied with what she's built.
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