I wrote the first 15 chapters and mixed between 1st person I and 3rd person Jack. I read Chapter 7 - 6 times today and still caught a mistake. This is an impactful chapter and I hope you enjoy. Jackstoryteller
Corrected chapters
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I have spent some time to correct the ofending chapters and will now work on adding new ones. Keep a look out.
Jack
New Chapter
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I know that it has been a while, but I had to clean up the story. Jack is back and I hope you enjoy.
I recognize this is a mess.
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I am working on total rewrite. I will have an editor review before posting. I am also working on additional chapters.