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Having recently posted the first chapter of a new story I've brewed up entitled 'Summer of Our Lives,' I hemmed and hawed over what to select to properly describe its level of sexual content. The amount of sexual intercourse is about the same as, say, my story 'The Lesson,' or 'Brotherly Love,' although it does take a fair amount longer for the characters in my new story to get around to doing the deed. During this time, there are still sexual things happening...
So, as to whether I was right or not in deciding to select 'Some Sex,' as the story's content, I'd like to know what the site's readers think--not specifically about the sexual content in 'Summers of Our Lives' and what you think it should be rated, although you can tell me that too, if you like--but about what makes the difference in a story between rating it to have 'Some Sex,' or 'Much Sex.' Is 'how long it takes before they get around to doing it' an overall factor for an entire story? Let me know what you think.
Hello to those of you who've decided to give my writing a go. I hope you enjoy what I create. I love to do it and I hope you love to read it, too.
It's been many long months since I have written anything for my first story on the this site, 'The Lesson.' But the other day I began to miss it, and even though I had no time to write I carved out a little space and chapter ten spilled out of me. I hope there are some of you who will be happy to hear about a new part to this story, and I'll be glad you haven't given up on me. Life is busy and writing time is short. I do hope you'll enjoy Melody and Burton's erotic adventures into parenthood. XP
I'm just going to say that there may be something you weren't expecting in this chapter...I'd been planning it for a while. Please let me know if you saw it coming! ;) (or anything else you have to say to me.)
Cheers,
IAKNS (It's a Kilt, Not a Skirt)
P.S. Due to my Scottish heritage wanting to assert itself, and the awesomeness of us Scots in general, I have felt the inkling to write a Scottish themed erotica...stroke story...romance...thing. If anyone has any ideas or thoughts they'd like to present to me on that subject, be it the kinkiest or the simplest idea, I would be very happy to hear and perhaps incorporate.
I just submitted the first part of a story called 'Party Favours' for posting. It follows a teenage girl called Carmen during the early 1800s and her older brother, Timothy, who controls her. She always listens to him due to her adoration and fear of him, and tries to find out why he's changed from the nicer person he used to be into such a scheming, controlling person. However, it takes two blows jobs, her virginity being taken with an audience, and Tim's intoxication to find out.
When I first had the idea and planning for this story it had a slightly different vibe than what it has now. I'm not sure if I portrayed the siblings' relationship quite the way I had originally wanted it--it was only a feeling I got at the time. I may change it if I get the right feeling again, but the basic planning and concept is there. The characters don't feel quite right, though.
Maybe I should be listening to what inspired in the first place as I write it to get that vibe--Lana del Rey's "Carmen."
But please let me know what you think of the story so far, anyway!
I will be trying to update Youth Retreat and The Lesson as well, and I would appreciate more feedback on them!
Thank you. :)
Just updated Breaking Point, for its fifth and final chapter. I hope all of you enjoy it, and whatever you may think of how I had planned and portrayed the ending, please tell me! I am very interested to know your opinions. How would you have ended it? Was it what you expected? Were there any huge surprises? What did you like--or not?
I am also planning to add a few new chapters to both Youth Retreat and The Lesson in the next little while, as well as starting a new story entitled "Party Favours." It's rather different from what I've posted here before--while still being erotica and sexually explicit, the acts depicted are not exactly always consensual, and there is some romanctic element, but not much.
Anyway, I hope you all have enjoyed Breaking Point, and that I'll be able to update the others soon! I can't promise, though, since it's very busy lately and I've just started reading a new book. :)
Just posted the third and originally final part of Breaking Point for submission. I had planned on this story to only be a three parter; but it feels like I might need to go on a little more with it. Maybe a four-parter instead?
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