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I have submitted Bunco for reposting. It is a fairly short story, so it only took three days to run all of it through a new grammar editor. But even those four short chapters had multiple grammatical errors. Which is probably explained by the fact that I did poorly in every English class I ever took. (And English is my first language, by the way. Well, actually, American Redneck is probably closer to my first language.) The biggest issue with going back and correcting the grammatical errors is it takes me away from adding to ongoing stories. Thus I will only do it when writer's block happens or I am really not motivated to add to other stories. (There are 3 other stories that have been started, but I haven't found a clean way to end them that doesn't look like I gave up and just whipped something out.) Enjoy the fix of Bunco and the very subtle changes I made with an eye to maybe doing a follow-on story.
With New Year coming I again am posting two chapters of "The Stowaway's Keeper" Enjoy the new chapters that are filled with more sex than earlier chapters. Nice way to start the new year.
Posting two chapters to give you something a bit more to read over Christmas. Hopefully you look at it as an early Christmas gift and not lumps of coal.
I have been told in the past when I posted this story somewhere else that the section with Dorothy should have been it's own story. And it will go on for another 10 chapters. This is also why of the story changed from "The Stowaway" to "The Stowaway's Keeper." It changes the main character from Cheryl to John.
Plus Dorothy was a tangent at the time I couldn't let go of. (That also happens at times. Another story I have not published her has this same issue and I will be trying to correct it at some point.) But also the weekend becomes important in what follows later. But I understand how it could turn some readers off. In which case sorry if it has ruined the story for you, but maybe if i do a full rewrite I will find a way to leave this part out and turn it into its own story. (I have three
chapters more I won't be using at this version of the story. They were planned for later chapters and would show the growing relationship of Dorothy and Pea.) So I can tell you at chapter 31 Dorothy will no longer be the main focus, but still a big part of the story. Please be patient. For those of you that it hasn't been a problem for get ready for a bit of a wild ride.
I would like to thank everyone that have pointed out I have a real problem with homonyms. Actually Grammarly and Quillbot have the same issue. I am keeping the list and when I get motivated to update the different chapters of both "The Companion" and "The Stowaway's Keeper" I will put all the changes people have sent into them. In the meantime please keep letting me know where the issues are.
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