It's been about 8 months since I last updated Swollen Desires, but I'm finally ready to continue with the story. The main thing that delayed me from continuing the story was my process itself. This story started off as an experiment, can AI be used to write adult content. Once I determined that it could, I wrote a Python script to aid me in the process of taking an outline, and expanding it into a well written story. That script worked ok for a while, but the longer the story got, the worse the AI output got. By chapter 16 I knew my script needed to be completely redone, and it was beyond my abilities.
As luck would have it, AI was now at the point that it could program better than I could. So I vibe coded a new script that generated great output regardless of how long the story got. This script worked so well, I decided that it should be a public website that anyone can sign up for and use to generate their stories. Thus, just-write.ai was born.
I then took my outline for Swollen Desires, and rebuilt the whole story, this time using my website to generate the output. I make improvements to the interface and added features as I went. The site is now fully fleshed out and works amazingly well. If any of you have story ideas that you've always wanted to write, but found you struggled with getting your idea to the page, please give my site a try and let me know how it goes. I welcome all feedback, good or bad.
And if you thought Swollen Desires was a good story before, it is really fantastic now, IMHO. While rebuilding it, I took the time to make the first few chapters pacing and characters consistent with the rest of the story. The plot has not changed at all, so rereading the whole story again is not required, but I do recommend it.
Hopefully this will all be worth the wait, gotta work on chapter 17 now. I do have an ending in mind, but no idea how many chapters left till I get there.
Thanks for your patience.
A lot of people have been asking when chapter 13 for Swollen Desires will be out. Good news, I just posted it for approval!
Sorry its been taking so long, been busy with moving into a new house. All settled in now, so expect future chapters to come on a more regular basis. In fact, Chapter 14 is already written, just needs a final edit and I'll post that one too, probably tomorrow.
Thanks for your patients.
I decided to change the stories category from 'Stroke Story' to 'Much Sex'. The first two pages put it firmly in the 'Stroke Story' category, but since chapter 3, I've been focusing more and more on plot and character development. I've got a lot more planned for the future too, so made sense to make the category change.
At some point I may go back and update the first two chapters to be more inline with the rest of the story, but we'll see. I could just be overthinking this.
Any feedback is appreciated.
I few people have pointed out that some sections of my story seemed to be repeating themselves. It had to do with the way the AI was expanding my summary. I have to give the AI my story in chunks, and sometimes between chunks it will repeat itself. I've fixed that problem by tweaking my code and manually removing any redundant parts of the story. This started off as just an experiment, to see if it was even possible to get decent porn out of AI. So far its wildly exceeded my expectations.
I went back and updated Chapter 2 & 3 just to remove the repetition, story wise they are unchanged. I'll be posting Chapter 7 tomorrow, easily the best chapter yet IMHO. My original plan was to just put out a mindless jerk off story, I had no thoughts as to where the story would lead beyond the first chapter. I've really gotten into now and know where I want the story to go in the future. Trust me, its just going to get better and better from here on out.
Feel free to send any constructive criticism my way, I'm open to any input. Don't worry about hurting my feelings, if you think the story sucks its the AI's fault. If you love the story, that was all me. LOL