Well I just uploaded the last chapter to the story. I appreciate everyone that read to the end. I definitely did not intend for the story to go down the path that it did when I started writing, but some of it was for creative purposes, since who wants to read a story where every choice has no negative consequences, but also some of the choices were things that were worst case scenarios that had been imagined. If your fantasy is cuckolding, then what happens if your wife falls in love with someone else? If you enjoy BDSM, what happens if there is an accident? Do you stay down if you are kicked or do you figure out a way to move forward? I am curious to see how the readers feel about Kris at the end of the story. Spoiler alert, do not keep reading until you have finished the story. I tried to write her as a realistic person, who has sacrificed her own wants and desires but eventually gets fed up. I see her as someone that Dawn manipulated, and as someone who got caught in the emotion and did not really think through the totality of her actions before she started and then each step felt like a small one. If I completely missed the mark, let me know. The story is told through Jim's journey, but he pretty much accepts the path laid out for him. Kris was the interesting character for me.
Thank you to everyone reading the story. I have posted it without an editor since finding an editor as a first time writer is difficult. I do believe I will write more in the future, but this story is complete. I decided to make this blog post to explore a couple of items that have popped up in the comments or that are on my mind. The first comment posted was "Oh hell, another weak-willed, willing cuck story. YUCK!" I laughed since the codes pretty much declared that without having to click on the story, but it did make me think about what people want in fantasy. I am lucky that I have a wonderful wife and children. I live most people's fantasy on a daily basis, but would anyone be interested in reading about it? I know the stories I find most interesting are situations outside of the norm. I also find it very interesting to see where people draw lines.
The most recent comment on the story is "Jim did NOT sign up for what just happened. He was blind sided by what Kris just did. This is not the new relationship he wanted.
I am going to set this story aside for a while. Maybe you will surprise me. As of now you have left no clues that Jim will get a life he wants. He wants to be important to Kris as a person, not as a toy. And if that can't happen with her... then Kris needs to show her love for him and let Jim go." I understand this sentiment and the poster may not want to finish the story. Every action has consequences. I understand this and that is why I wrote fantasy. It is much safer to explore consequences in a story than to risk them in real life. I know the only constant in life is change. Do husbands really think they can push their wife to be with another man and it won't change them? If you truly love someone so much that you will do anything for them, how far is anything? Are there some actions that even when done in a consensual manner as an experiment, cross a line that can't be gone back from?
I welcome any feedback and apologize for any continuity mistakes. The story started off small without a destination and I just kept making decisions that allowed the characters to develop. I think the personalities of each main character will be more developed by the end of the story and hopefully they are relatable (even if their actions and decisions are not!)