Desert Nights: Blog

I have just submitted this story. It's a rewrite of a previous story that was not well-liked. So, I deleted that story and I'm trying again with this new version. The basic plot is the same, but I changed the ending.

I'd love to hear what you think.

I have finally finished the story of Abbey. Abbey is a real woman, but the scenes that are described are fantasies that I devised to satisfy her craving for humiliation and degradation.

However, now she has a boyfriend, and we have not chatted for more than 2 months, so it seemed like a good time to bring this story to an end.

I'm still writing, but I plan to have a lot of chapters finished before I post them on here.

Meanwhile, I have started publishing on Bookapy, so if you are interested, I have a few books available there for the modest price of $1.99 each. Look for author Joe White. Thanks.

I have finally finished writing the last chapter of Marie. It has taken me almost 3 years to complete, partly because of work and life having to take priority.
But, through this amazing journey, I always had the real life 'Marie' to encourage me to find new ways to humiliate her online.

However, the story got too dark for her and caused thoughts that she did not want to have running through her mind, so she and I reluctantly stopped chatting.

So, with no Muse to bounce my ideas off, I decided that it was time to finish this story that is partly true and partly fiction.

I respect the real life 'Marie' a lot and admire her for taking control of her life by seizing the chance to fulfill her deepest desires, and experience what she could never explore at home in her life in the Philippines.

Goodbye 'Marie' the Asian_wife whose nick caught my attention one day and who was generous enough to share her experiences with me.

I was amazed at the strong feelings that this story aroused in readers.

Some loved it, judging by the number of votes from 7 - 10, but others hated it, judging by the number of votes from 1 - 5 and the number of negative comments.

Personally, if I don't like a story, I move on and don't return after a maximum of 2 chapters. Here, however, I see comments stating that chapters 3, 4 and 5 are boring. Strange!

Then there are the readers who told me to give up writing; that I had no talent; that I had cheated the readers by missing a specific code etc.

On the other hand, although there were several high number votes, I only received one positive comment. Perhaps people who liked the story did not feel the need to leave a comment.

Finally, the traffic to this story also helped to increase the traffic to my other two stories, but without the negative comments - or indeed any comments.

Has any other writer been through the same experience?

I'd love to hear your thoughts.

I have not had a lot of time to work on my stories, but I have had several discussions with Abbey (real name) about the direction the story should take.

She commented that chapter 3 is probably not something she would do, so I have rewritten how she shows Joe her submissive side.

We both think it makes for a more believable plot device.