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As I wrote it, I thought it was quite amusing, but the voting says not so much. Perhaps it was just my juvenile sense of humour. Anyway I've given it a refresh and redone the timeline, so now there isn't the reversal with the first holiday, it's all linear. Let's see if it helps.

I'll be posting this story shortly, tomorrow probably, chapter by chapter. It is finished, so start reading with confidence! Any comments are welcome as always and will benefit later readers as I am always updating.

It's a pure fun story about a guy and his wilful daughters, that was triggered by a picture as my stories quite often are. One figure is Rose Marie from DoA. I'll include it in the cover. It's a stroke story, girl power as ever and wall to wall sex, incest and underage :)

It's told in the first person alternating between two characters, a new format for me. Does it work?....

I don't know if my writing is gradually getting better, but reading through My Innocent Daughter, Yeah, I think I saw how it fell a bit flat in the middle and how to fix it. So I've done some rewriting. If you like my stuff you might like to give it a try. Teen girls are in control, as usual.

Sorry about the slowdown, things have got busy in real life for a bit. I always finish my stories so don't give up on Saffie and the others :) Chapter 14 is under way.

I've just had yet another go at this story, with version 2.5. My problem with it has always been that Douglas loves Faye but he can't end up marrying her because they are so unequal. So the story degenerated from an intimate first half to my usual teen orgy nonsense in the second, and in the process it lost the feeling.

So now I've tried to keep the focus more on Faye and maintain the mood, without giving up on the basic plot. If any readers feel like commenting on this, ideally in the public Comments at the end, I'd be very grateful.