Just submitted chapter 3 to publish on the site.
I appreciate the comments and feedback I've received. I was able to get the first three chapters out in relatively quick succession as I had them mostly done and fleshed them out a little more before I published them. Hopefully quality didn't suffer in my haste.
The next and subsequent chapters may take a little longer. They are outlined but need much more attention. Also, work and life will keep me a little busier here this week.
Continue to let me know what you think: of my poor punctuation; grammar; writing style; or the story in general.
