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Hey everyone!
I've just finished Chapter 21!
I hope you'll be understanding as the school system and graduation rituals in my country are quite different from what I'm depicting. I'm writing this based on movies and novels I've read, which is one reason I tried to keep the early parts brief.
Anyway, graduation marks a significant milestone for Andy as he prepares to leave high school behind and set sail for new shores. It's a bittersweet moment, full of mixed emotions and fond farewells.
Thanks for reading
Carmichael
Hey everyone! Sorry for the delay in posting - I've been out on a business trip and it's been hectic. But I'm back now and ready to share the latest chapter with you.
I have to admit, I got a bit carried away at first and the chapter ended up being way longer than I intended. The whole convention event was spread over several chapters first but thanks to your comments about pacing, I managed to cut it down and hopefully kept only the important parts.
I've been struggling with how to move the story forward, but I think I've finally got a handle on where things are going.
Right now I have a plan what is happening next and more important when and how this story finishes.
Thanks for sticking with me.
I removed a lot of filler scenes from chapter 19. I hope it is better readable now.
Thanks for your feedback
Cheers
Carmichael
Hey there,
You know how some characters seem to take on a life of their own? Well, Aunt Cloe is definitely that character for me. She's an absolute joy to write, and I find myself constantly excited to explore her adventures and quirks.
This chapter sets the stage for some (hopefully) exciting events to come.
But that's not all – we finally get to see Andy and his mom growing closer on a new level. Their relationship is evolving, and I can't wait for you to see where it goes.
I hope the story pace is okay for you.
Cheers
Carmichael
Hi everyone,
I wanted to take a moment to say thank you for your support and feedback on my story. Your insights are invaluable, and I'm doing my best to fix any inconsistencies and spelling errors as they come up. I'm truly happy that the story is read!
I know the beginning of the story is a bit on the slow side, and I appreciate your patience as the pace picks up.
Right now, I’m diving into a fun segment where the group will visit a manga convention. Writing this section has been both exciting and nerve-wracking. I really hope I don't make a fool out of myself talking about things I am really no expert in. I’ve made an effort to stick with anime/game mainline characters to ensure the references are relatable for everyone.
At its core, this part of the story is about the group's dynamic and their experiences at the event, rather than focusing on manga. I hope you enjoy reading about their adventures as much as I enjoy writing them.
Cheers
Carmichael
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