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This is the end of an era for Andy and Ms. Parker, but also a beautiful beginning as they step into new phases of their lives.
Thanks for all your support and feedback. You guys rock!
Until next time,
Carmichael
Hey everyone!
I've just finished Chapter 21!
I hope you'll be understanding as the school system and graduation rituals in my country are quite different from what I'm depicting. I'm writing this based on movies and novels I've read, which is one reason I tried to keep the early parts brief.
Anyway, graduation marks a significant milestone for Andy as he prepares to leave high school behind and set sail for new shores. It's a bittersweet moment, full of mixed emotions and fond farewells.
Thanks for reading
Carmichael
Hey everyone! Sorry for the delay in posting - I've been out on a business trip and it's been hectic. But I'm back now and ready to share the latest chapter with you.
I have to admit, I got a bit carried away at first and the chapter ended up being way longer than I intended. The whole convention event was spread over several chapters first but thanks to your comments about pacing, I managed to cut it down and hopefully kept only the important parts.
I've been struggling with how to move the story forward, but I think I've finally got a handle on where things are going.
Right now I have a plan what is happening next and more important when and how this story finishes.
Thanks for sticking with me.
I removed a lot of filler scenes from chapter 19. I hope it is better readable now.
Thanks for your feedback
Cheers
Carmichael
Hey there,
You know how some characters seem to take on a life of their own? Well, Aunt Cloe is definitely that character for me. She's an absolute joy to write, and I find myself constantly excited to explore her adventures and quirks.
This chapter sets the stage for some (hopefully) exciting events to come.
But that's not all – we finally get to see Andy and his mom growing closer on a new level. Their relationship is evolving, and I can't wait for you to see where it goes.
I hope the story pace is okay for you.
Cheers
Carmichael
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