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The first post ran together for some unknown reason. I think Grammarly might have deleted part of the file. Needless to say, I went back, manually separated it again, and reposted the update.
The muse came around long enough for me to finish the next chapter. I got a wake up call when I used Grammerly to view it. Almost 300 issues in just over 6,400 words is difficult to embrace. I'll admit that they have improved the old to the new both with the program and its abilities and more importantly what it did to the chapter for readability. Enjoy Von_In_Your_Mind
Hello,
The muse woke up, had me reread MDMP, and a new chapter found its way out. Enjoy
Greetings,
It's been a while since I worked on the story. I went back and read the three stories that included Johnathan Smitheres to reembrace that storyline. Reading GTWII showed a glaring error that I overlooked by the time between stories. It will take word smithing to put things back in order. For that to happen I am going to have it removed from the site for now. Von
Hello.
Some errors were pointed out, and I have corrected them and reposted the chapters.
Thanks for pointing them out.
I continue to write the next installment.
Von
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