I don't know about other authors but writing can sometimes be a slow process. Self criticism can kill your productivity more than anything. I found myself agonizing over this last chapter as it is a critical turning point for our players. I hope it turned out well.
In this chapter things start to go wrong for Aime, Sarah and Mike. Earl asserts himself and life will never be the same for the players.
I have received dozens of positive comments which I appreciate wholeheartedly . I have responded to everyone that left a return email address.
If you are here, I am guessing you have an interest in the story I have posted, titled "Aime".
Originally, I the story was posted on a famous anonymous board called 4chan. The actual original post was in a thread about 'perverted things you have done' and was very short. The original post is lost to the internet but it went something like:
"I hid a camera in my 14yo sisters room and caught her having sex with black guy with a huge dick."
In subsequent posts the cry went up for more details and of course many were skeptical. In response the poster wrote up the story that I saved and posted as the first chapter. As far as the skeptics were concerned, most of them believed him after he provided the story as well as a lot of background to the situation and details on how he filmed her. I became a believer and the story encouraged me to pick up my pen and write a follow up to it. So while the first chapter is true, the subsequent chapters will be purely from my perverted mind.
I received a response to my story which asked about the rape story code. Without giving too much away, I can say that bad things will happen to the protagonists. However, what does occur happens in the scheme of the overall story and is not there for the sake of shock. Bad things happen to good people in this world.