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So many people have added my story of Eric and Andy to their Library, thank you for that.
Chapter 2 is coming along, we get our first glimpse of the pair starting to 'teach' each other things about themselves in this one. So a little bit of sex in it, but not them just 'going at it'. We are talking a pair of youngsters here who are just beginning their explorations of sex. I'm trying to make it as realistic as possible, so things will move slow.
Thanks again for all the comments and Likes. That means a lot to me.
I'm receiving comments, which to me matters more than score, and I'm humbled by the ones I'm getting.
"This is off to a delightful start."
"This was a sweet story."
"Very cute story with believable characters."
"I like the characterization of the two very much."
"So far very sweet. Keep it coming!"
Awww, thank you for all those. I do plan on continuing as I have basic outline through chapter six and chapter two is currently being written. For those asking 'don't disappear or abandon this', rest assured that I plan on continuing this to a logical conclusion. It's not going to be an epic, like some I've seen here, but maybe a sequel?
Again, thanks for all the positive e-mail.
I've started posting a story that's fiction, but also a 'what if'. Growing up I had a best friend who was a bit of a tomboy, just like Andy in the story. Difference is that my friend moved away just after sixth grade so things never developed between us. What if she hadn't moved, what might have happened?
Anyway, new writer, so any constructive criticism is very much appreciated.
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