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This chapter is sort of the mid-way point of the story. I had wanted to incorporate some drawings and some songs but it is too difficult to do. I have no way to judge if the story is liked except to read the comments and it seems to be popular with both males and females. I was afraid that even though I am female some women would think that it was a sort of objectivism of women but that was not my intention at all. I think that the situation with regard to finding mates in the 1840s was a lot different than today. I tried to show that there was an entirely different class of women in the west ranging from society girls imported from the east coast to the hard bitten whores who worked hard at a difficult profession in a land where men were less than gentlemen. The McGregor clan is a family that has close family ties but that was not unusual at that time and in that place.
I hope that Chapter 3 does not disappoint readers. I edited out some rather raw sex stuff because some of my relatives know I am writing the story and I don't want to appear too depraved beyond a certain enjoyment of erotic content. I must confess that this chapter caused me to use some of my recently purchased bedroom gadgets just to reduce my frustration at not being either the Sheila or the Scarlett in the story. The description of Martha hits close to home because I was a bit like her at one time and regretted the fact that I had low esteem and a sense of looseness that made me ashamed when looking back. Now that I am older and wiser, I can see it was just the exuberance of youth and the delight in celebrating a plentiful supply of cock in one's life. I have had some nice letters from mostly male readers and am grateful for their thoughts and their encouragement. As a female, I tend to look at all sex from the point of view of romance but I know from experience that lust and sex are quite different than romance. I think that if I had been born a boy I would have had lots of fun going around and trying to get into girl's pants at every opportunity. From my feminine perspective, it is difficult to admit promiscuity freely but in my character of Scarlett, an admitted nymphomaniac, I can see the world differently. The love of cock is uppermost in my mind and yet I am bound by the mores of society to be appropriate and well-behaved with feminine sense of being a "lady".
This chapter is a little more erotic but I had a lot of fun writing it. I know that if I had 7 males all waiting their turns to explore my secrets, I would be pretty excited just like Sheila. Sometimes, I get confused and write Scarlett instead of Sheila but I guess that is normal since I keep seeing myself in the role of Sheila trying to satisfy 7 horny brothers. Please don't think I am a nymphomaniac or anything, it is just that I am not getting anything unless it is in the shower or in the dark imagining I am one of my characters being serviced by a hot horny male just the way I like it. I suspect that Sheila's reluctance to engage in anal sex is similar to my own hang-up in that regard after a disasterous incident in college when a football player was a bit more forceful than I would like. I won't say it was rape because I was entirely complicit but I think in this case no was truly no and I was too weak to stop it. I think just like Sheila, I could be coaxed into it by an understanding man but understanding men are few and far between for someone of my years and unfortunate experience. In the meantime I will stick to my own devices and now the writing of erotica that seems to make me feel a whole lot better about things.
I have started my first story and I hope everybody likes it. My plan is to work on this story until it is completely finished because I can only think about one thing at a time. It is a fact that I spend most of my time now thinking about sex but I think that is sort of normal since I am a widow and only have my battery operated boyfriend to keep me company. This first story called, "A Bride for Seven Brothers" loosely follows the concept of the musical "Seven Brides for Seven Brothers" which I so dearly love. My story is not as benign as the original because I will get into the sordid facts of 7 lusty men getting close to the oldest brother's new bride before their wives show up on the scene. When all the brides are present, the cast of 14 men and women indulge in sexual sport that might offend some readers. I urge caution in reading if you have any reservations about raw sex between consenting adults. I have tried my best in insert a sense of romance into the story because at heart I am a complete romantic always questing for my perfect soul-mate. But in a choice between romance and pure unadulterated sex, I will opt for the latter because I am so deprived of it in my current circumstances. I know that there has always been a criticism of this scenario that the brothers were just using the brides for their own selfish pleasure but I tend to see it as a balanced relationship all around with a bit of in-law incest that is unavoidable in a house with 7 highly-sexed couples living together. The only thing I can promise is a "Happy Ending" to my first story. It will have a total of 9 chapters. I wish I had pictures to add to this story because it is so vivid in my mind. Miss Scarlett
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