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I was surprised when there was a negative reaction to my story "The Bitch". I think that some readers misunderstood what the story was about. I was not trying to make the lead character appear in a bad light. I was just pointing out that sometimes young people can be easily misled into mischief. But as the song goes, "Don't try to persuade the young" She might be content to be a bitch now but that will all change as she matures. It was a one-off spur of the moment thought. I am writing a story now about a young girl who enters a convent. That will be my contrition for "The Bitch".
This second story is one that I have been daydreaming about for some time. It is sort of a mixture of "Pride and Prejudice" and "Doctor Jekyll and Mister Hyde" that is set in 1800s England. I have inserted a sort of Victorian attitude toward sex in the speech and actions that might be disappointing to some readers of erotica but has a good deal of double innuendo and hidden meaning. It is more of a role play by the upper classes during the time period and was probably ridiculed by the underclasses as hypocritical and total deception. I suspect the thought of fucking and being fucked was just as important to the upper classes as it was to the common folk that watched their kabuki dance to mollify society of the time.
Submitted the final chapter of "A Bride for Seven Brothers" today. It was a lot of fun writing this story and I have to admit I even enjoyed editing it and reading over the juicy parts more than once. I made sure I had my "Battery Operated Boyfriend" right by the bed and closed my eyes when necessary pretending I had Angus, or Stewart or Jamie right next to me. They were my favorites of the McGregor brothers. I thought the Army troopers were a little nasty and rough in the way they treated the womenfolk but it was a hard business riding all day chasing the dreaded savages away from decent folk try to earn an honest living. Well mostly decent folk with the exception of some nasty characters here and there. I am excited about the idea of Eve going off on her own with her new friend the Cavalry officer up to the Pacific Northwest where females are scarce as hen's teeth and even a friendly plain one can have her pick of lusty he-men. I hope I can collect my thoughts to find some excitement for her with the lumberjacks and the fishermen in dire need of some female comforting in the quiet nights under a bright and inspiring moon to light their way to paradise.
I was a bit carried away with the orgy scene in the big house with all nine McGregor women and the seven brothers and almost didn't want it to end. This chapter 8 is sort of a continuation of the orgy which is like a last celebration before settling down to the serious business of tending their husbands physical needs and cutting back on the in-law incest in the McGregor clan. The entire sequence with the Cavalry and the frenzied orgy in the barn and the stables with the troopers was not originally planned but it seemed a good place for it. The rule about not poking the McGregor bride's cunts was only fair under the circumstances and the fact that both Ruth and Eve were not bound by the rule showed their non-bride status in the light of day. The final chapter will set the stage for their eventual acclimation to normal married life with perhaps a touch of "family business" to spice up an otherwise dreary existence on the western frontier for women drained of the flower of youth far quicker than normal.
I have submitted chapters 5 and 6 to the story and will be submitting chapter 7 this weekend. My original plan was to do this story in 9 chapters but I might be able to do it in 8 chapters if I make chapters 7 and 8 a bit longer. I have to edit it to see what works best. I have to warn everyone that chapter 7 will include a confusing and intense orgy of celebration and some violence from outside stimuli. I am being careful to keep Scarlett and Sheila separated in the story because their characters tend to intermingle and that is far too confusing to readers. The character of Eve was unplanned in the original outline but it came quite naturally as an offshoot of the laundry scene with the desperate young women. I was even considering a new story with Eve as the lead character striking out on her own into the wilderness with a young mountain man eager to find the perfect valley filled with game and hides that he could harvest for the annual barter camp. It is different than the gold mining scenario but has more survivalist themes with less ties to civilization. There will be some Indian characters in that story but I am still sorting it out in my head and want to devote full time to this story about the seven brothers as priority one. Scarlett
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