Was going to delete these stories but things change.
Some will be extended but most stories will not allow voting.
My thanks for reader comments
I am truly sorry for the delay to correct and finish my stories. During 2015 most will be completed. A few will end then a new story will be added as in a series. I will use the number of downloads as the sequence criteria. Stories that I write using other Pens will follow the same way. Lapi, Rolf and 1 or 2 others should all be completed or re-written in 2015.
chapter 3 is posted, chapter 4 just in proofing. Hope you enjoy.
I know there are many who hold certain things as faith or a belief in something other than themselves. I recently had a conversation with someone I have known 40 years. My reluctance to 'believe' God was coming to save his people on 6 July, 2014 seemed incredulous to him. Did I not 'know' that the Earth was the centre of the Universe? What was I some heretic to place the teachings of a Pope, equal to that of some sinner? My point is that over time many things we see and do today would have been called impossible or the 'work' of the devil. Many have died or been tortured because of some faulty belief.
Medicine, TV, Airplanes etc. have all been named 'Magic' at one time or another. History seems to ignore the things that cannot be explained and we all know that the Earth is less than 5,000 years old, the 'bible' tells us so.
This story was told over countless centuries by our Early Ancestors, Etruscans, Egyptians, Greeks even the Romans but did not make it into the bible verses. No proof, just a few legends, temples, artifacts and ruins. Everyone knows legends like Troy, The Spear of Destiny, Temple of Solomon, Goliath etc. can't be real, can they?
I am posting another section, I call it Chapter 3. The new Pete and his Kathy are pretty nice people, aren't they. At least in Chapter 3 they are.
Why is there a caution or violent code, these are just plain good folk, right. Maybe, maybe not. It looks like at least one portion of their first task was easier than anyone thought. Ha, Ha, Ha!
This is not just a do-over. I added sci-fi but in the story everything is, even today, in this time, under investigation and experiment. Science today has mastered teleportation, albeit only 100 feet or so.(Q'bits, Computer to computer, no linkage between them).
What will be included in this storyline is no different than 18th or 19th century man being shown, Video/TV, an A-300 Jumbo Jet or pictures of the nuclear or a neutron bomb exploding.(modified hydrogen weapon, kills people mostly, not structures).
I might stretch the facts a might, but the basis for everything is or will be true. Think of the story as if Alchemy was real, like making gold or diamonds from base materials, impossible, right. Wait, they do that already.
Thanks, just hope readers enjoy the story. I used someone's Universe and hope it fits what it was intended for. My story characters will be heroes.