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Hi everyone! I posted the first chapter of my novel "A Horrible Choice". It is 19 chapters long with an epilogue.
Be advised, there is a lot of graphic sex and language in parts of it. If this type of story offends you, then please avoid it. If you don't find this material offensive, then I sincerely hope that you enjoy it!
I made a stupid error posting chapters 15 and 16 of this story. I skipped over chapter 15. I have since posted the missing chapter and apologize for all of the confusion.
As far as the story is concerned, Sandy's problems are the catalyst that is propelling Bonnie towards standing up for herself. I hope everyone enjoys how it turns out.
This is actually a novel that I wrote a few years ago. I have never tried publishing it, and since it is already written, all I have to do is a final proof on each chapter I wrote before posting it. Therefor, no one has to worry about me "loosing interest" and leaving everyone hanging. I intend on posting a new chapter every few days or so.
Once again, thank you to all of you who are taking the time to read my writing, and especially for your feedback!
I added an end note to the story as a continuation of the end of the story. It should clear up Barbara's actions at the very end of the story. I hope this will be an improvement.
It seems that some people don't like the way I ended The Wish. Let me explain. Barbara was not only frightened by her experience, but she was upset with Diane, because she thought talking about the romance novel was to blame for the experience. My test audience of four women understood the ending completely. Maybe it is a "woman thing". At any rate, I was trying to portray Barbara's feelings in a concise, humorous way. (All four women laughed when I read it to them.)
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