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I submitted chapter 5a this morning and noticed formatting issues with it. None of the italicized sentences came through. I've requested the site correct this issue. In the interim, wherever you see underscored dialogue pretend they are italicized.
I've re-posted the prologue and first chapter of Thief of Roses. It now incorporates the Bard's Tales as the prologue to ToR, which is where it really belongs. I'll delete the Bard's Tales as a standalone story in the next day or so. I'm writing the sequel and have 6 chapters complete, but only one through editing. Once I have a few chapters edited, I'll start posting one a week. So you should see Thief of Shadows start in a week or so. Thank you for all the comments, both positive and negative. They all help me keep the story in the right direction. Oh and thanks for voting too, I guess a 8+ on my first story isn't too shabby.
RCG
It has been a trying few weeks. While I liked the 'Thief of Rose's, I needed a way to tie in the several linked stories banging around in my head. Ideally 'The Bard's Tales' should be the prologue of the 'Thief of Roses' and will be when I rewrite it and clean up the syntax. For now it is a story on its own. I am in the middle of writing the sequel, and the prologue and first chapter are back from editing. It should be up by the end of the weekend. I hope you enjoy 'The Bard's Tales'.
Thank you for your feedback
RCG
Chapter 13 is up today and I've received positive feedback on it. Although apparently I had an "All Ready" moment. Three times to be precise. I'll make the necessary corrections and repost it tomorrow. Chapter 14 should be ready in a day or so and I should have it up Sunday or Monday and then I'll get back on schedule for Thursday/Friday posts.
RCG
I posted chapter 11 tonight but it has formatting problems. No indentation went through and I have no idea why. I'll fix it in the next day or so. I also caught a misspell; pantings instead of paintings, I'll fix that as well.
I was impressed with the number of guesses on the song. Well done.
Update on the end. Since you've read 11 then you know about Mara's quest. I have decided to include it in this story, so that will push the story along a little farther. I'll end up with two dramatic climaxes instead of one. I know it's weird, but then I guess so am I.
RCG
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